I need some constructive criticism. I’m stumped, I’m not finished with this but I can’t continue, I feel like there’s something wrong but I’m not entirely sure what it is?
Today we celebrate the birthday of Dogbomb. Back in 2018 , he was diagnosed with ALS , a life-threatning disease that weakens your body and bones. But that didn't stop him from being positive and kind. Hope you have the best birthday ever Dogbomb. We lo